I think Finnish National Parks have to be rescued and saved from surrounding threats.
National parks are jewels of the Finnish nature reserves, which are good for peolple who want to spend time in a peaceful environment. There are also animals and plants which need protection because they are endangered. When people want to wander in those National parks they can perhaps see animals, which they can not see anywhere else. People might think that there are too many National parks for no reason in Finland and that they are just a waste of land which could be built full of buildings, malls and golf courses. There can not be any paper industry factories near a National park for the bad climate they can cause and the animals are legitimated for a calm environment.
Finland National Parks are located in very good places. National parks are good tourist spots and the places where they stand are near of nice surroundings and there are also lot of mountains for hiking and terrain for camping.
However there could be more advice about these National parks because common people don`t even know about these fantastic National parks.
Article Summary
1)There are 35 national parks in Finland, which is a big reason why wilds touring is surrounded by the best things to do in this Nordic country. The Finland National Parks can be found all over the land. Moreover to admiring different landscapes visitors can also see some Finland wildlife, which includes bears, wolves, and reindeer.
2)One of the more intresting Finland national parks can be found in the Finnish archipelago. The Archipelago National Park, which is a UNESCO atmosphere reserve, is a great place to get an overall idea of what the common landscape is like in the huge Finnish islands chain. While the Archipelago National Park is the southernmost National Park in Finland, the Lemmenjoki National Park is the most northerly. Lemmenjoki National Park is the biggest of all the National Parks in Finland, and it gets its name from the Lemmenjoki River. In the summertime, visitors to Lemmenjoki National Park can enjoy some Finnish hiking and try their luck digging for gold.
3)Visitors to a interesting little city in just south of the Arctic Circle and Lapland called Oulu can always escape to the wilds at nearby Syöte National Park.Syöte National Park is a good place to glide down some Finnish slopes because it receives the most annual snowfall in Finland. Snowshoeing, snowmobiling, sledding, skiing, and ice-fishing in the winter in Finland are all a blast.
4)As you head into southern Finland, you will find a soaring number of National Parks. More than half of the national parks of Finland are found in the southern part of the country, so you’ll never be too far from one when vacationing in Helsinki, Turku or Tampere for example. The Finland’s most highly-visited parks is Nuuksio national Park, which is a great place to do some Finland camping.
5)The Finland National Parks mentioned in this article are just some of the ones to put in your mind, and no matter of which national parks you visit, you are guaranteed the chance to get in touch with nature. Just be sure to bring some bug spray with you when visiting the Finnish national parks in the summertime, as the mosquitos can get pretty annoying.
Source: Finland National Parks
Argumentative essay: Very good
The introductory paragraph could have been a little bit longer. Some kind of general topic sentence would have been nice, like, “Finland has some of the world’s most beautiful national parks.” The last paragraph ought to sum up your original argument, although your suggestion is also an interesting one. Just add a little more to it, some conjunctions and some general statements, and you have a beautiful essay structure 🙂 Your argument and its main points are brilliant and straight from the heart.
Summary: Good
You could have used more of your own words and less details. The length of the original article is impressive, this was quite a challenge to summarize.
Grammar: Very good
–> animals are USED TO a calm environment
–> near something (no prep.)
–> places where they EXIST
–> Finland’S National Parks
–> advice = neuvoja, information = informaatiota
Source: Good
Who wrote it and which website, date…???
Media / appearance: Very good
Argument
I agree with saving the National parks, camping in a National park is good way to get rid of stress and have good time with friends. Argument was easy to read and had a good beginning and ending. Had a good point that people should have got more advice about these parks. Language is clear in text without any extra humor. Writed the argument in short way and wrote his point straight. Could give hints how to help saving National parks.
Article
Lenght is around 1/4 of the orginal witch is good lenght for the summary and didint realy have any extra words there. Getting the main idea was easy.
No other links than the link to article.
Make sure you first write your Argumentative Essay separately.
Then write the Article Summary (summarized paragraphs should be numbered), then the Source.
In this order. Do not copy-paste the article here, summarize it in your own words!